Well, it's a good start.
I liked that it had a good basic structure to it. It had a plot, and a comical ending. It was confusing in parts but you could use some more practice and effort--but it's not bad. Good job.
Well, it's a good start.
I liked that it had a good basic structure to it. It had a plot, and a comical ending. It was confusing in parts but you could use some more practice and effort--but it's not bad. Good job.
thanks! like i said im not the greatest but im trying thanks for watching glad u sorrta liked it
I like to make music, and I enjoy drawing.
Age 34, Male
Random Oaks, Florida
Joined on 10/10/09