Well, it's a good start.
I liked that it had a good basic structure to it. It had a plot, and a comical ending. It was confusing in parts but you could use some more practice and effort--but it's not bad. Good job.
thanks! like i said im not the greatest but im trying thanks for watching glad u sorrta liked it
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